Way to think on your feet, there. I'll have to remember that one next time someone's nodding off on me.

Nice story. Excellent end.

By the way, Mike... I've had a number of people comment to me about how much they enjoyed this article on the Genre Hacks blog, but like so many of your posts, it's a lot more effective in cartoon format... so I'm linking the post here.

I may try to do a blog posting this way... with cartoons, giving you full credit for the idea of course.

Very creative blog, my friend.

Excellent advice in candy-coated cartoon format.

Well done.

-Marco